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Haley Cameron, Editorial Manager at Quietly Media
Hey Stephen Ceresia, Industrial Stephen Morgan Maguire, CEO Morgan , a few small copy tweaks requested from our side:

P3LG Blurb:
  • "...insight they need into..." (versus about)
  • "ensuring that P3 stakeholders can better understand the legal issues and assess the risks associated with projects" (add the)
About Us Blurb:
  • "We are based in Vancouver, Canada, and have an international..."
Otherwise, looking really good! Let me know if you have any questions about these changes. 

Haley
Morgan Maguire, CEO
Great. Thanks Haley Cameron, Editorial Manager at Quietly Media Haley . Also, do you have any thoughts on the "coming soon" or something else for P3LG, given that we'll be exlcuding a link to the product page at this point? 
Haley Cameron, Editorial Manager at Quietly Media
Morgan Maguire, CEO Morgan  that makes sense to me! Are you envisioning this within the product overview blurb, or below the screenshot (similar to the link out to ISLG)?
Morgan Maguire, CEO
Hi Haley Cameron, Editorial Manager at Quietly Media Haley ,

I suppose that is my question to you and Melissa Cowell, General Manager at Industrial Melissa . What do you suggest?

Morgan 
Haley Cameron, Editorial Manager at Quietly Media
Morgan Maguire, CEO Morgan Melissa Cowell, General Manager at Industrial Melissa ,

We would suggest adding (Website coming soon.) to the end of the P3LG blurb. 

Haley
Morgan Maguire, CEO
OK. Great. Thanks Haley Cameron, Editorial Manager at Quietly Media Haley .

Melissa Cowell, General Manager at Industrial Melissa , could you please add this (along with the other changes above).

Also, could you please ensure a Google reCaptcha function is inserted above the submit botton in the Contact Us section.

Thanks,

Morgan
Melissa Cowell, General Manager at Industrial
Morgan Maguire, CEO Morgan  

Sounds good. Kevin will implement the above changes directly in Wordpress.

Mel
Morgan Maguire, CEO
Great. Thanks Melissa Cowell, General Manager at Industrial Melissa . Let me know if you need any input on our end.

Morgan