Managing your Groups session tracking settings

Paul  ready for review

Hi Naomi :

I inserted my comments/edits via Suggesting mode. Please finalize it.

Kishan : please have a look and let us know if you have any further comments.

Thanks,

Paul

Looks good to me

Hi Paul this has been published on the CMS.  https://new.investorstatelawguide.com/knowledge-centre/home/account-settings-group-management-and-notifications/group-management/managing-your-groups-session-tracking-settings/

Updated in the KC tracking sheet: https://3.basecamp.com/3691577/buckets/5559242/messages/3563210464

Hi Naomi :

Could you make the following changes?
1. Please insert an apostrophe below instead of "groups"

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2. Please note the change below for the next item
Notepad and Document Comparison group settings.

Thank you,

Paul

Paul , 

Yes will make the change, and noted for the other article. Any other changes before I publish?

Hi Naomi :

I can only edit https://docs.google.com/document/d/1jbuI8f7xhlR8QPj2WnicxejGHR7pcYPOEGx1a692e10/edit in suggesting mode, and it seems to be creating confusion in the final draft that I want - are you able to let me be in editing mode or see the text in a clean copy?

For example, Client/File should always be consistent (there was one missing on the text).

It should be group managers, not Group Managers below.

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Thanks,

Paul

Hi Paul , 

Yes because this document was written in Industrials' Google, I was not able to edit it myself either. Would you mind looking at the updates? If this is alright for you I can leave it, otherwise I can create a new google doc for us to edit!

Let me know, 

Naomi

Hi Naomi :

The article generally looks good now.

1. Please change the title of the second related article as follows: Notepad and Document Comparison group settings.

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2. Please change "right hand" to "right-hand" (with a hyphen).

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3. "Optional" below should be changed to "Optional (Recommended)."

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4. First "Clients/File" should be changed to "Client/File" and please bring in the period inside the quotation mark (client". should be changed to client.")

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Thank you,

Paul

Hi Paul , 

Please see the following updates made: https://new.investorstatelawguide.com/knowledge-centre/home/account-settings-group-management-and-notifications/group-management/managing-your-groups-session-tracking-settings/

Looks good, Naomi . 

Thanks,

Paul